docs/182004: Missing a word(a nother solution).
matthew.penna at gmail.com
Wed Sep 11 06:53:08 UTC 2013
On Sep 10, 2013, at 8:37 PM, Li <fender0107401 at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Number: 182004
>> Category: docs
>> Synopsis: Missing a word(a nother solution).
>> Confidential: no
>> Severity: non-critical
>> Priority: low
>> Responsible: freebsd-doc
>> State: open
>> Class: doc-bug
>> Submitter-Id: current-users
>> Arrival-Date: Wed Sep 11 00:40:00 UTC 2013
>> Originator: Li
>> Release: 9.1 Release
> I am sorry.
> I reported this problem a few minutes ago, but I did not give a perfect solution.
> In our handbook: 7.5.3. KMyMoney
> Here is the original sentence:
> KMyMoney is a personal finance created by the KDE community.
> I think the better one should be:
> KMyMoney is a personal financial tool created by the KDE community.
> In other words, I think we should add “tool” and also change “finance” to “financial”.
In this case, I think the original suggestion of "personal finance tool" is more correct. "Personal finance" is a widely used term. Compare to "corporate finance" or "public finance."
(I just rejoined the list after an 11-year hiatus. Greetings to all.)
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