Patch for porter's handbook

Eitan Adler lists at eitanadler.com
Sat Dec 8 22:04:46 UTC 2012


On 8 December 2012 16:56, Guido Falsi <madpilot at freebsd.org> wrote:
> On 12/08/12 22:22, Eitan Adler wrote:
>>
>> On 8 December 2012 16:19, Guido Falsi <madpilot at freebsd.org> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi!
>>> Some time ago the maintainer of net-mgmt/mrtg noticed that the porter's
>>> handbook still reference NOPORTDOCS in place of the new DOCS option in
>>> optionsng.
>>>
>>> I have a patch(attached) which fixes this. bapt has already seen it and
>>> approved it, as suggested by him I added a tag around "DOCS".
>>>
>>> I'd like this patch to be revised by someone of the documentation team
>>> and
>>> approved for committing it. I'm obviously accepting any comment or
>>> correction.
>>
>>
>> The content changes look good. However, please don't make whitespace /
>> formatting changes in the same patch as this makes it harder to figure
>> out what changed for both the reviewers and translators.
>>
>>
>
> Good point. Here is a revised patch with only the content changes included.

Looks good to me.

Not your text but:

"and neither would be added to port packing list" doesn't sound quite
right.  Try replacing "and neither would be" with "or".


-- 
Eitan Adler


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