docs/162961: [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook

[Manolis Kiagias]

The following reply was made to PR docs/162961; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr at gmail.com>
To: =?ISO-8859-7?Q?Beat_G=E4tzi?= <beat at FreeBSD.org>
Cc: bug-followup at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/162961: [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook
Date: Thu, 01 Dec 2011 00:16:14 +0200

 On 30/11/2011 9:00 ðì, Beat Gätzi wrote:
 >> Number:         162961
 >> Category:       docs
 >> Synopsis:       [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook
 >> Confidential:   no
 >> Severity:       non-critical
 >> Priority:       low
 >> Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 >> State:          open
 >> Quarter:
 >> Keywords:
 >> Date-Required:
 >> Class:          update
 >> Submitter-Id:   current-users
 >> Arrival-Date:   Wed Nov 30 07:30:11 UTC 2011
 >> Closed-Date:
 >> Last-Modified:
 >> Originator:     Beat Gätzi
 >> Release:        FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT i386
 >> Organization:
 >> Environment:
 > System: FreeBSD daedalus.network.local 9.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT #5 r217615M: Thu Jan 20 01:02:35 CET 2011 root at daedalus.network.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
 >
 >
 > 	
 >> Description:
 > 	- Attached patch updates the VirtualBox section of the virtualisation
 > 	  chapter in the handbook. This work was done by Eric Newberry during
 > 	  the Google Code-In contest so please give him the credit for this
 > 	  update:
 > 	  https://google-melange.appspot.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2011/7137268
 > 	
 >
 
 Hi,
 
 Nice work!
 
 I made some fixes to this and uploaded a revised patch here:
 
 http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/virtualization-virtualbox-chapter-patch-new.txt 
 <http://people.freebsd.org/%7Emanolis/patches/virtualization-virtualbox-chapter-patch-new.txt>
 
 and a build (without images) here:
 
 http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/virtualization-guest.html 
 <http://people.freebsd.org/%7Emanolis/patches/virtualization-guest.html>
 
 Main changes are:
 - Use passive voice in some places to avoid "you" references
 - Improve markup in several places (filenames, devices, man pages etc). 
 There maybe also a few other places (i.e. vboxvideo_drv should probably 
 not be tagged using <command>)
 - Some minor language fixes to match the Handbook style in general
 
 This also needs a complete whitespace patch on top, but this can wait 
 until any remaining  issues are fixed. Please post followups to this if 
 you have any comments.