docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes

Hans Petter Selasky hselasky at c2i.net
Sat Aug 20 14:10:12 UTC 2011


The following reply was made to PR docs/159898; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Hans Petter Selasky <hselasky at c2i.net>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk at mit.edu>
Cc: "bug-followup at freebsd.org" <bug-followup at freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/159898: [patch] libusb.3 whitespace, markup, grammar fixes
Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2011 16:06:05 +0200

 On Friday 19 August 2011 17:22:08 Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
 > (was: Re: Fwd: svn commit: r224917 - head/lib/libusb)
 > 
 > On Fri, 19 Aug 2011, Hans Petter Selasky wrote:
 > > On Friday 19 August 2011 05:40:46 Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
 > >> Dear Hans Petter,
 > >> 
 > >> I saw a couple grammar and style issues as this went by, and ended up
 > >> going through the whole man page.  Could you take a look at docs/159898
 > >> and make sure I didn't change anything factually incorrectly?
 > >> 
 > >> Thanks,
 > >> 
 > >> Ben Kaduk
 > > 
 > > Looks good!
 > > 
 > > One more change I would suggest:
 > > 
 > > +A convenience function to open a device with vendor and producd IDs
 > > 
 > > Into:
 > > 
 > > +A convenience function to open a device by vendor and product IDs
 > > 
 > > --HPS
 > 
 > Updated patch with comments from hps -- thanks for catching it!
 > 
 > -Ben
 
 Looks good. Who will commit it?
 
 --HPS



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