newbies page (ppp)
ryusuke at FreeBSD.org
Thu Dec 9 13:32:03 UTC 2010
"Resorces for Newvies" page,
>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation
>to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant
>to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information
>and the latest updates.
"The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..."
Do you agree?
I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days.
How about the following patch?
diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml
--- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58
+++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000
@@ -70,9 +70,8 @@
beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy
- <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is
- a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those
- parts of the
+ <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp.
+ You might start with at least those parts of the
that are relevant to your needs, and explore the
<a href="http://www.awfulhak.org/ppp.html">ppp page</a>
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