docs/149790: [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes

Glen Barber glen.j.barber at gmail.com
Thu Aug 19 03:00:14 UTC 2010


>Number:         149790
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch][handbook] Chapter 7 Multimedia: Minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
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>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Aug 19 03:00:13 UTC 2010
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Glen Barber
>Release:        8.1-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.1-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 8.1-PRERELEASE #3 r210428: Sat Jul 24 13:37:37 EDT 2010     root at orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION  amd64
>Description:
Minor grammatical fixes for the Multimedia chapter.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


Patch attached with submission follows:

--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-09-29 11:06:13.000000000 -0400
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml	2010-08-18 22:42:49.312202902 -0400
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@
       effects, and control attached MIDI devices.</para>
 
     <para>With some experimentation, &os; can support
-      playback of video files and DVD's.  The number of applications
+      playback of video files and DVDs.  The number of applications
       to encode, convert, and playback various video media is more
       limited than the number of sound applications.  For example as
-      of this writing, there is no good re-encoding application in the
+      of this writing, there are no good re-encoding applications in the
       FreeBSD Ports Collection that could be used to convert
       between formats, as there is with <filename
       role="package">audio/sox</filename>.  However, the software
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>How to playback DVD's, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
+        <para>How to playback DVDs, <filename>.mpg</filename> and
           <filename>.avi</filename> files.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@
      usable, but a bit clumsy.</para>
 
     <para>As of this writing, there is no input module shipped with
-     <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVD's.  There are third party
+     <application>xine</application> which will play CSS encoded DVDs.  There are third party
      builds which do have modules for this built in them, but none
      of these are in the FreeBSD Ports Collection.</para>
 


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