docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2

Glen Barber glen.j.barber at gmail.com
Wed Jul 29 16:10:08 UTC 2009


>Number:         137243
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Glen Barber
>Release:        8.0-BETA2
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009     root at orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION  i386
>Description:
Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors.  The handbook states the following:
"This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." 

This should either be: 

a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run.

or

b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run.


[1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR




Patch attached with submission follows:

--- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig	2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400
+++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml	2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400
@@ -281,8 +281,8 @@
 
       <programlisting>@daily                                  root    freebsd-update cron</programlisting>
 
-      <para>This entry states that once every day, the
-	<command>freebsd-update</command> will be ran.  In this way,
+      <para>This entry states that once every day, 
+	<command>freebsd-update</command> will run.  In this way,
 	using the <option>cron</option> argument,
 	<command>freebsd-update</command> will only check if updates
 	exist.  If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded


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