Patches to the FDP Primer (from Last Year)

[Manolis Kiagias]

Gabor PALI wrote:
> Folks,
>
> I created some patches for you to review during the translation of the
> mighty FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer.  Well, it has been a
> while ago, but I think some things still should be fixed up.
>
> Here are the significant ones (others could be found in the same
> directory, they usually fix typos, markup and capitalization as well
> as the highlighted patches partially):
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.doc-build.patch.diff
> - Remove description of (documentation) package target as it is not
> supported and it will be changed.  Of course, the target in question
> still lives in the Makefiles, but I would not mention it any more
> (only when resurrected in some form).
>   

So is the 'package' target broken? Admittedly I've never used it before
reading your patch, but it seems it worked for me, building a package
for the fdp-primer.  I could install it with pkg_add, but then
pkg_delete errored out trying to uninstall it.  Not sure whether we
should completely remove it from the docs though.
The rest of the patch looks ok to me.

> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.psgml-mode.patch.diff
> - Mark up Emacs functions with <function> rather than <literal>
> - Add port reference for editors/psgml
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.see-also.patch.diff
> - Fix broken links
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.structure.patch.diff
> - Rewrite the sentences about the Handbook images to provide more
> up-to-date information instead of mentioning the possibility of
> including images in a book
> - Add some note on the localization of those images
>
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/26/fdp-primer.the-website.patch.diff
> - Add a description about WEB_LANG
>
>
>   

All these look fine to me!

> Note that I plan to bump the copyright year after the commits as there
> are some content changes hiding in my proposed changes.
>
> Thank you in advance.
>
> Cheers,
> :g
>
>
> PS: I want to touch the "Translations" chapter too, but I still have
> not got time to compose a usable patch for that.
> _______________________________________________
>   

This is all nice work. I've been struggling with the translation of
ppp-and-slip lately (plus I had rather limited spare time), hence the
late reply. I think it would be ok to commit all the above, maybe get a
few opinions on removing the reference to the package target. I see no
other problems.

Cheers,
Manolis