RFC: second try at improving Handbook's boot manager text

John Baldwin jhb at FreeBSD.org
Thu Sep 15 17:31:29 UTC 2005


On Wednesday 14 September 2005 05:44 pm, Gary W. Swearingen wrote:
> A couple of people didn't agree with my grammar and one had some other
> comments about the boot manager text of the Handbook (and my change).
> So here's another go at it, before I've committed it this time.
> There's considerably more to criticize now.  :)

Looks ok to me.

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