docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes

[Remko Lodder]

The following reply was made to PR docs/77817; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Remko Lodder <remko at elvandar.org>
To: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou at cox.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 06:21:31 +0100

 Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 >>Number:         77817
 >>Category:       docs
 >>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
 >>Confidential:   no
 >>Severity:       non-critical
 >>Priority:       medium
 >>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 >>State:          open
 >>Quarter:        
 >>Keywords:       
 >>Date-Required:
 >>Class:          change-request
 >>Submitter-Id:   current-users
 >>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
 >>Closed-Date:
 >>Last-Modified:
 >>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 >>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 >>Organization:
 >>Environment:
 > 
 > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou at opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > 
 > 
 >>Description:
 > 
 > 
 > 	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp at FreeBSD.org? Change this.
 > 	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
 > 	o add white space: devicename -> device name
 > 
 > 
 >>How-To-Repeat:
 > 
 > 
 >>Fix:
 > 
 > 
 > --- vinum.diff begins here ---
 > Index: chapter.sgml
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.34
 > diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
 > --- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
 > +++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
 > @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 >  	The Vinum Volume Manager
 >  	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 >  
 > -	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten at FreeBSD.org>
 > +	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp at FreeBSD.org>
 >  	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org>
 >  
 >  	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 > @@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 >  	    start</command> command.</para>
 >  
 >  	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
 > -	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
 > -	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
 > +	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
 > +	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 >  	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 >  
 >  	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
 > @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 >  	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 >  	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 >  	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 > -	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > +	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 >  	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 >  	</listitem>
 >        </itemizedlist>
 > --- vinum.diff ends here ---
 > 
 > 
 > 
 >>Release-Note:
 >>Audit-Trail:
 >>Unformatted:
 > 
 
 You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the
 version numbering already had been done yesterday.
 
 Could you please send a updated patch without the uppercase X diff?
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- 
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       Remko Lodder  ** remko at elvandar.org
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