docs/90351: [patch] Fix spelling mistake and misleading info in Alpha HW release notes

Gavin Atkinson gavin.atkinson at ury.york.ac.uk
Tue Dec 13 20:50:05 UTC 2005


>Number:         90351
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Fix spelling mistake and misleading info in Alpha HW release notes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Dec 13 20:50:03 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Gavin Atkinson
>Release:        FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD 945testbox.york.ac.uk 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #0: Mon Dec 12 18:04:02 GMT 2005 root at 945testbox.york.ac.uk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386

>Description:
	Accommodate and interchangeably are spelt incorrectly in the
Alpha Hardware release notes.
	Also, when rendered, they suggest that the fxp(4) driver does not
work on FreeBSD in general.  I have no idea if they still have issues on
Alpha, but I know they are good cards on other platforms at least :)

>How-To-Repeat:
	Read http://www.freebsd.org/releases/6.0R/hardware-alpha.html
>Fix:

--- alpha-hwnotes.diff begins here ---
Index: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/alpha/proc-alpha.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/cvs/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/alpha/proc-alpha.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.78
diff -u -r1.78 proc-alpha.sgml
--- src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/alpha/proc-alpha.sgml	2 Nov 2005 22:18:47 -0000	1.78
+++ src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/alpha/proc-alpha.sgml	13 Dec 2005 20:39:05 -0000
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
     that. Kernel build times halved when I went to 32 Mbytes. Note that
     the SRM console steals 2Mbyte from the total system memory (and keeps
     it). For more serious work 128 Mbytes or more are recommended.
-    Although Alpha machines typically can accomodate large to very large
+    Although Alpha machines typically can accommodate large to very large
     physical memory sizes, &os; is limited to 1 or 2 Gbytes (dependent
     on the core chipset) of RAM. This restriction is due to the
     current implementation of the VM system.</para>
@@ -2108,7 +2108,7 @@
      power it on/off remotely, reset it etc. See also the description for
      the RMC in the DS10 section of this document. RCM versus RMC is not a typo,
      the various documentation I consulted used both acronyms
-     interchangably. Note that if you want remote power on/off to function
+     interchangeably. Note that if you want remote power on/off to function
      you need to connect a small DC adapter to the machine in order to have
      the RCM logic powered. You need to supply 9-12V DC to the small inlet 
      located next to the keyboard connector.</para>
@@ -2608,7 +2608,7 @@
     driver). Some new SRM versions are known to recognize the Intel
     8255x Ethernet chips as driven by the &os; &man.fxp.4; driver. But
     beware: the &man.fxp.4; driver is reported not to work correctly
-    with &os; (although it works excellently on &os;/x86).</para>
+    with &os;/alpha (although it works excellently on &os;/x86).</para>
 
     <para>In general the SRM console emulates a VGA-compatibility mode
     on PCI VGA cards. This is, however, not guaranteed to work by
--- alpha-hwnotes.diff ends here ---
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>Audit-Trail:
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