New firewall section (was: Re: HEADS UP: doc/ slush begins)

[Giorgos Keramidas]

On 2004-09-20 16:59, Brad Davis <so14k at so14k.com> wrote:
> > : +      <para>The IPFW sample rule set (found in
> > : +        <filename>/etc/rc.firewall</filename>) delivered in the basic [...]
> >
> > What are the ``service ports'' referred to here?
>
> This does need better wording.. I can't come up with anything right now.

I'll see if I can come up with something.

> > : +      <para>The OpenBSD PF user's guide is here:
> > : +        <ulink url="http://www.openbsd.org/faq/pf/index.html"></ulink>.
> > : +        </para>
> >
> > Please trim the unnecessary whitespace here too.
>
> Well the period is at line 71, so I pushed the </para> down so I
> wouldn't go over the 72 line rule.

IMHO, it's ok to keep longer lines in the source when there is no
obvious way to split the text.

> Also I have encountered an undefined &man.ipnat.8

That should have been &man.ipnat.1;.  I was writing the comments in a
haste and didn't check my entities, but we can easily fix that :-)