en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml small fix

[Simon L. Nielsen]

On 2003.12.12 00:16:12 -0159, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wrote:

> 	Small uniformization. Should we always use a comma
> after Inc. or not at all? I know it is minor and I should probably
> decide myself but I rather ask then be sorry.
>
> 	Attached is a patch that show the change. If the decision
> is that a comma should not follow, I'll remove some in the same
> file.

Sorry about the late reply, I was rather busy in December.

In general I have just copy/pasted the trademark attribution from
whatever each company had on their website.  Therefor I think they
should be left as they are, unless somebody with better English grammar
skills than me can positively say if the commas should be there or not.

> --- en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml.orig	Thu Dec 11 23:58:50 2003
> +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/trademarks.sgml	Thu Dec 11 23:59:31 2003
> @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
>      other countries.</para>
>  
>    <para>Sun, Sun Microsystems, SunOS, Solaris, and Java are trademarks
> -    or registered trademarks of Sun Microsystems, Inc. in the United
> +    or registered trademarks of Sun Microsystems, Inc., in the United
>      States and other countries.</para>
>  
>  <!-- Product Trademarks -->
> @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
>      registered in the U.S. and other countries.</para>
>  
>    <para>Macromedia and Flash are trademarks or registered
> -    trademarks of Macromedia, Inc. in the United States and/or other
> +    trademarks of Macromedia, Inc., in the United States and/or other
>      countries.</para>
>  
>    <para>Microsoft, Windows, and Windows Media are either registered

-- 
Simon L. Nielsen
FreeBSD Documentation Team
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