Big Patch Commit

[Simon L. Nielsen]

On 2003.09.14 16:50:34 -0700, Hiten Pandya wrote:

> I am planning to commit the patch in PR docs/55226.
> If anyone has objections towards, speak now, or forever hold
> your peace. :-)

Not really objections, but you need to have a look at each change.  At
least one is IMO wrong:

--- advanced-networking/chapter.sgml    21 Jul 2003 13:35:50 -0000      1.234
+++ advanced-networking/chapter.sgml    2 Aug 2003 13:26:43 -0000
@@ -2798,7 +2798,7 @@
            group of machines it represents.  For example, the Art
-           department at Acme Inc. might be in the
+           department at Acme Inc.  might be in the
            <quote>acme-art</quote> NIS domain.  For this example,

I also think that the changes that add   to "FreeBSD 4.8" and so
on, might as well change FreeBSD to &os; when your are changing the
lines anyway.

-- 
Simon L. Nielsen
FreeBSD Documentation Team
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