git: fd309107e9dc - main - Minor language improvements. Note that they can't be changed by sysctl (I think they can be changed as a tuneable.)

[David Malone]

The branch main has been updated by dwmalone:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=fd309107e9dc403ef376bb1b992323977cc678f5

commit fd309107e9dc403ef376bb1b992323977cc678f5
Author:     David Malone <dwmalone at FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2021-07-29 08:23:39 +0000
Commit:     David Malone <dwmalone at FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2021-07-29 08:26:19 +0000

    Minor language improvements. Note that they can't be changed
    by sysctl (I think they can be changed as a tuneable.)
---
 share/man/man4/random.4 | 11 +++++++----
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/share/man/man4/random.4 b/share/man/man4/random.4
index 3b3f9b2330e3..fb851cdb7ba1 100644
--- a/share/man/man4/random.4
+++ b/share/man/man4/random.4
@@ -44,9 +44,11 @@ state, and will block reads until it is seeded for the first time.
 .Pp
 To provide prompt access to the random device at boot time,
 .Fx
-automatically persists some entropy data in
+automatically saves some entropy data in
 .Pa /boot/entropy
-for the loader to provide to the kernel.
+for the
+.Xr loader 8
+to provide to the kernel.
 Additional entropy is regularly saved in
 .Pa /var/db/entropy .
 This saved entropy is sufficient to unblock the random device on devices with
@@ -95,7 +97,8 @@ Other than
 .Va kern.random.fortuna.minpoolsize ,
 and
 .Va kern.random.harvest.mask ,
-all settings are read-only.
+all settings are read-only via
+.Xr sysctl 8 .
 .Pp
 The
 .Pa kern.random.fortuna.minpoolsize
@@ -126,7 +129,7 @@ sysctls
 can be used to confirm
 settings in a human readable form.
 Disabled items
-in the latter item
+in the latter
 are listed in square brackets.
 See
 .Xr random_harvest 9