git: 1e298eef9f - main - Fix some igor warnings: - Overlong lines - Indentations - Use <litera> tags within a title - Add commas after i.e. and e.g.
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Mon Dec 28 18:43:22 UTC 2020
The branch main has been updated by bcr:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=1e298eef9f850921a8ce1514eeaaea05d7a6a723
commit 1e298eef9f850921a8ce1514eeaaea05d7a6a723
Author: Benedict Reuschling <bcr at FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2020-12-28 18:40:30 +0000
Commit: Benedict Reuschling <bcr at FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2020-12-28 18:40:30 +0000
Fix some igor warnings:
- Overlong lines
- Indentations
- Use <litera> tags within a title
- Add commas after i.e. and e.g.
---
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml | 85 ++++++++++++++------------
1 file changed, 45 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
index 72656bc867..0ebd1bb20f 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
@@ -252,8 +252,8 @@
&prompt.root; <userinput>make install clean</userinput></screen>
<para>Either of these installations results in the complete
- <application>&xorg;</application> system being installed. Binary packages
- are the best option for most users.</para>
+ <application>&xorg;</application> system being installed.
+ Binary packages are the best option for most users.</para>
<para>A smaller version of the X system suitable for experienced
users is available in <package>x11/xorg-minimal</package>. Most
@@ -267,13 +267,13 @@
<info>
<authorgroup>
- <author>
- <personname>
- <firstname>Warren</firstname>
- <surname>Block</surname>
- </personname>
- <contrib>Originally contributed by </contrib>
- </author>
+ <author>
+ <personname>
+ <firstname>Warren</firstname>
+ <surname>Block</surname>
+ </personname>
+ <contrib>Originally contributed by </contrib>
+ </author>
</authorgroup>
</info>
@@ -308,8 +308,8 @@
<para>Add the user who will run
<application>&xorg;</application> to the
<systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> or
- <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group to enable 3D acceleration
- when available. To add user
+ <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group to
+ enable 3D acceleration when available. To add user
<replaceable>jru</replaceable> to whichever group is
available:</para>
@@ -317,8 +317,8 @@
</step>
<step>
- <para>The <application>twm</application> window manager is included
- by default. It is started when
+ <para>The <application>twm</application> window manager is
+ included by default. It is started when
<application>&xorg;</application> starts:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>startx</userinput></screen>
@@ -338,13 +338,15 @@
<para>Access to <filename>/dev/dri</filename> is needed to allow
3D acceleration on video cards. It is usually simplest to add
- the user who will be running X to either the
- <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> or <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group.
- Here, &man.pw.8; is used to add user
+ the user who will be running X to either the <systemitem
+ class="groupname">video</systemitem> or <systemitem
+ class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group. Here,
+ &man.pw.8; is used to add user
<replaceable>slurms</replaceable> to the
- <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> group, or to the
- <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group if there is no
- <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> group:</para>
+ <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem> group, or to
+ the <systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group if
+ there is no <systemitem class="groupname">video</systemitem>
+ group:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pw groupmod video -m <replaceable>slurms</replaceable> || pw groupmod wheel -m <replaceable>slurms</replaceable></userinput></screen>
</sect2>
@@ -464,7 +466,7 @@
<para>Driver name: <literal>intel</literal></para>
<para>For reference, see <link
- xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Intel_graphics_processing_units"/>.</para>
+ xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Intel_graphics_processing_units"/>.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -991,13 +993,13 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
on this, see the &man.X.7; manual page or <xref
linkend="truetype"/>.</para>
- <para>To install the above Type1 font collections from binary packages,
- run the following commands:</para>
+ <para>To install the above Type1 font collections from binary
+ packages, run the following commands:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install urwfonts</userinput></screen>
- <para>Alternatively, to build from the Ports Collection, run the following
- commands:</para>
+ <para>Alternatively, to build from the Ports Collection, run the
+ following commands:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/x11-fonts/urwfonts</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make install clean</userinput></screen>
@@ -1347,11 +1349,12 @@ EndSection</programlisting>
<entry><filename>Xaccess</filename></entry>
<entry>The protocol for connecting to
<application>XDM</application> is called the X Display
- Manager Connection Protocol (<acronym>XDMCP</acronym>).
- This file is a client authorization ruleset for
- controlling <acronym>XDMCP</acronym> connections from
- remote machines. By default, this file does not allow
- any remote clients to connect.</entry>
+ Manager Connection Protocol
+ (<acronym>XDMCP</acronym>). This file is a client
+ authorization ruleset for controlling
+ <acronym>XDMCP</acronym> connections from remote
+ machines. By default, this file does not allow any
+ remote clients to connect.</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -1627,16 +1630,17 @@ hald_enable="YES"</programlisting>
<programlisting>exec ck-launch-session startplasma-x11</programlisting>
- <para>A third method for starting <application>KDE Plasma</application>
- is through <application>XDM</application>. To do so, create
+ <para>A third method for starting <application>KDE
+ Plasma</application> is through
+ <application>XDM</application>. To do so, create
an executable <filename>~/.xsession</filename> as
follows:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>echo "exec ck-launch-session startplasma-x11" > ~/.xsession</userinput></screen>
- <para>Once <application>KDE Plasma</application> is started, refer to
- its built-in help system for more information on how to use
- its various menus and applications.</para>
+ <para>Once <application>KDE Plasma</application> is started,
+ refer to its built-in help system for more information on how
+ to use its various menus and applications.</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="x11-wm-xfce">
@@ -1731,7 +1735,7 @@ hald_enable="YES"</programlisting>
<note>
<para>To immediately load the kernel module into the running
kernel issue a command like <command>kldload
- nvidia</command>. However, it has been noted that some
+ nvidia</command>. However, it has been noted that some
versions of <application>&xorg;</application> will not
function properly if the driver is not loaded at boot time.
After editing <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, a
@@ -1756,7 +1760,8 @@ hald_enable="YES"</programlisting>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="xorg-configuration">
- <title>Configuring xorg.conf for Desktop Effects</title>
+ <title>Configuring <literal>xorg.conf</literal> for Desktop
+ Effects</title>
<para>To enable <application>Compiz Fusion</application>,
<filename>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</filename> needs to be
@@ -1817,7 +1822,7 @@ EndSubSection</programlisting>
<package>x11/nvidia-xconfig</package> by running (as
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>):</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nvidia-xconfig --add-argb-glx-visuals</userinput>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nvidia-xconfig --add-argb-glx-visuals</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>nvidia-xconfig --composite</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>nvidia-xconfig --depth=24</userinput></screen>
</sect2>
@@ -1838,15 +1843,15 @@ EndSubSection</programlisting>
&prompt.user; <userinput>emerald --replace &</userinput></screen>
<para>Your screen will flicker for a few seconds, as your window
- manager (e.g. <application>Metacity</application> if you are
+ manager (e.g., <application>Metacity</application> if you are
using <application>GNOME</application>) is replaced by
<application>Compiz Fusion</application>.
<application>Emerald</application> takes care of the window
- decorations (i.e. close, minimize, maximize buttons, title
+ decorations (i.e., close, minimize, maximize buttons, title
bars and so on).</para>
<para>You may convert this to a trivial script and have it run
- at startup automatically (e.g. by adding to
+ at startup automatically (e.g., by adding to
<quote>Sessions</quote> in a <application>GNOME</application>
desktop):</para>
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