cvs commit: src/share/man/man4 acpi.4

Yar Tikhiy yar at FreeBSD.org
Mon Aug 7 07:28:48 UTC 2006


yar         2006-08-07 07:28:47 UTC

  FreeBSD src repository

  Modified files:
    share/man/man4       acpi.4 
  Log:
  Fix things I misadvised to Nate Lawson:
  
  - "Ns No" is redundant, so reduce it to just "Ns";
  - use Li to mark up CPU and system power states because here they are
    just strings to be typed literally (add more such mark-up as well);
  - the best practice of typesetting tells us to use an en-dash to
    indicate a closed range; fortunately, groff_char(7) provides such a symbol.
  
  In addition, consistently use a comma between independent clauses
  coordinated by a conjunction.
  
  Pointed out by: ru (mark-up part)
  MFC after:      3 days
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.59      +44 -28    src/share/man/man4/acpi.4


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