cvs commit: src/usr.sbin/cached cached.8
ceri at submonkey.net
Sat Apr 29 10:10:22 UTC 2006
On Sat, Apr 29, 2006 at 01:34:03AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes 2006-04-29 01:34:03 UTC
> FreeBSD src repository
> Modified files:
> usr.sbin/cached cached.8
> Follow FreeBSD mdoc(7) conventions:
> - Remove hard sentence breaks;
> - Avoid using double negatives or "sexist" language;
> - Expand contractions;
> - Remove a blank line;
> - Some grammar changes.
Nice work, but:
> | -The cache is actually per-user. It means that each user can work only with the
> | -cached data, that were cached by him and can't poison the cache of other users.
> | +The cache is actually per-user.
> | +This means that each user can work only with the
> | +cached data that was cached locally and cannot poison the cache of other users.
I preferred "that were cached by him" over "that was cached locally".
"Locally" implies "on the same system" to me. If you want to avoid using
"him", try "themselves".
That must be wonderful! I don't understand it at all.
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