cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

[Glen Barber]

On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote:
> wblock      2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD doc repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Various fixes:
>   "effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
>   "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
>   Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
>   Spelling/grammar.
>   Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
>   Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
>   Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
>   "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
>   Add link to network information.
>   

And it was approved by gjb :)


-- 
Glen Barber | gjb at FreeBSD.org
FreeBSD Documentation Project

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