cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia
chapter.sgml
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Tue Sep 29 15:06:14 UTC 2009
bcr 2009-09-29 15:06:13 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml
Log:
A couple of small wording, grammar and style fixes:
- add between the &epson.perfection; and the model number
- replace a ` with ' to be consistent with the screen output
- contain -> contents
- cause -> because
- Reword the sentence containing "most of time" to one that is
easier to read
Approved by: jkois (mentor)
Revision Changes Path
1.135 +8 -9 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml
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