cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
remko at elvandar.org
Mon Jul 14 08:32:34 UTC 2008
On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote:
> Tom Rhodes wrote:
>> trhodes 2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC
>> FreeBSD doc repository
>> Modified files:
>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
>> Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to
>> get a VPN up and running. While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC
>> since it's no longer a valid kernel option.
>> PR: 121863
>> Quick review by: remko
>> Revision Changes Path
>> 1.324 +293 -829
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> I think you meant:
> <para>At this point, both networks should be available and
> seem to be part of the same network. Most likely both
> networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be. To
> - allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added
> + allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added
> Maybe I'm wrong here.
I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can
happen", traffic flow means that it happends...
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