cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml

[Ganbold]

Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> danger      2007-03-22 20:30:18 UTC
>
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent 
>   Added files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Add a new Handbook chapter about FreeBSD jails. It has been originally written
>   by Matteo Riondato and further work has been done by me and my great mentors.
>   Despite it took months to get it in, we believe it's a right time to commit and
>   have a wider audience to look at it, and improve it even more. I hope you will
>   like it :-)
>   
>   Approbed by: trhodes (mentor), keramida (mentor)
>   
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.101     +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile
>   1.170     +2 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml
>   1.36      +1 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent
>   1.1       +463 -0    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml (new)
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Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my
translation work :().

The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses.

      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
        a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the
        jail itself).

It could be:

      <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run
        a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the
        jail itself).

Maybe I'm wrong here.

thanks,

Ganbold