cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip
chapter.sgml
Giorgos Keramidas
keramida at FreeBSD.org
Fri Mar 9 13:54:11 UTC 2007
keramida 2007-03-09 13:54:10 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
Log:
Tweak a bit the text, to make it easier to read. "It is worth
your while ensuring" may be confusing to some non-native English
readers. "It is a good idea to ensure" means the same and it
carries less potential for confusion.
Revision Changes Path
1.176 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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