cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml

[Marc Fonvieille]

On Tue, Jul 17, 2007 at 05:37:10PM +0000, Chin-San Huang wrote:
> chinsan     2007-07-17 17:37:10 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD doc repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml 
>   Log:
>   - Remove 4.X related stuff.
>   - Update the info about hard drives whcich supported by FreeBSD.
>   
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.800     +8 -8      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
> 
> http://cvsweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml.diff?r1=1.799&r2=1.800
> | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	2007/07/08 09:46:14	1.799
> | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	2007/07/17 17:37:09	1.800
> | @@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
> |  
> |  <book>
> |    <bookinfo>
> | -    <title>Frequently Asked Questions for FreeBSD 4.X, 5.X, and 6.X</title>
> | +    <title>Frequently Asked Questions for FreeBSD 5.X, and 6.X</title>
> |  
> |      <corpauthor>The FreeBSD Documentation Project</corpauthor>
> |  
> | -    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: /usr/local/www/cvsroot/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v 1.799 2007/07/08 09:46:14 chinsan Exp $</pubdate>
> | +    <pubdate>$FreeBSD: /usr/local/www/cvsroot/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v 1.800 2007/07/17 17:37:09 chinsan Exp $</pubdate>
> |  
> |      <copyright>
> |        <year>1995</year>
> | @@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
> |      </legalnotice>
> |  
> |      <abstract>
> | -      <para>This is the FAQ for FreeBSD versions 4.X, 5.X, and 6.X.
> | -        All entries are assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 4.0 and
> | +      <para>This is the FAQ for FreeBSD versions 5.X, and 6.X.
> | +        All entries are assumed to be relevant to FreeBSD 5.X and
> |          later, unless otherwise noted.  If you are interested in
> |          helping with this project, send email to the &a.doc;.  The
> |          latest version of this document is always available from the
> | @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
> |    <chapter id="introduction">
> |      <title>Introduction</title>
> |  
> | -    <para>Welcome to the FreeBSD 4.X-6.X FAQ!</para>
> | +    <para>Welcome to the FreeBSD 5.X-6.X FAQ!</para>
> |  
> |      <para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the
> |        most frequently asked questions concerning the FreeBSD operating
> | @@ -2210,9 +2210,9 @@ File: +DESC (ignored)</screen>
> |          </question>
> |  
> |          <answer>
> | -          <para>FreeBSD supports EIDE and SCSI drives (with a compatible
> | -            controller; see the next section), and all drives using the
> | -            original <quote>Western Digital</quote> interface (MFM, RLL,
> | +	  <para>FreeBSD supports EIDE, SATA, SCSI, and SAS drives (with a 
> | +	    compatible controller; see the next section), and all drives using
> | +	    the original <quote>Western Digital</quote> interface (MFM, RLL,
> |              ESDI, and of course IDE). A few ESDI controllers that use

Hello,

I noted you often do useless (and confusing for the translators)
line-wrappings (or what we call "mixing whitespaces and content changes").
In the example above, only one line was really modified and finally we
end with three modified lines.  I let you imagine the "headaches" for a
translator or any other person trying to figure out what was really
modified.  Just to sum up: we mustn't mix content and
whitespaces/linewrapping/layout changes.

-- 
Marc