cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
chapter.sgml
Christian Brueffer
brueffer at FreeBSD.org
Sun Apr 29 15:57:00 UTC 2007
brueffer 2007-04-29 15:56:59 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
chapter.sgml
Log:
Reworded sentences to avoid second person usage, some grammar fixes,
other linguistic improvements.
Reviewed by: trhodes
Revision Changes Path
1.393 +16 -15 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
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