cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml

Ceri Davies ceri at submonkey.net
Fri Oct 13 04:45:25 PDT 2006


On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes     2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD doc repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml 
>   Log:
>   "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me.  Reword
>   slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook.


> | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml	2006/05/16 14:01:06	1.166
> | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml	2006/10/13 10:29:51	1.167
> | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
> |  	to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>
> |  	and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.
> |  	This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work
> | -	of many individuals.  Many sections do not yet exist and some of those
> | -	that do exist need to be updated.  If you are interested in helping
> | +	of many individuals.  As such, some sections may become dated and need
> | +	updated.  If you are interested in helping out

... and require updating.

Ceri
-- 
That must be wonderful!  I don't understand it at all.
                                                  -- Moliere
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