cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml

[Dmitry Morozovsky]

On Mon, 4 Dec 2006, Doug Barton wrote:

DB> >   Modified files:
DB> >     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml 
DB> >   Log:
DB> >   A class C network for 192.168.0.0/24 includes the address
DB> >   range 192.168.0.0-192.168.0.255, not 192.168.0.0-192.168.255.255
DB> >   
DB> >   Submitted by:   Tom Van Looy <tom at ctors.net>
DB> >   
DB> >   Revision  Changes    Path
DB> >   1.338     +1 -1      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml
DB> > 
DB> > http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml.diff?&r1=1.337&r2=1.338&f=h
DB> > 
DB> 
DB> In an ideal world, all references to Class [ABC] networks would
DB> disappear from our docs, and be replaced by their CIDR equivalents.

There are suprisingly small number of such places.  What do you think about the 
patch attached?

Sincerely,
D.Marck                                     [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN]
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diff -u -r1.20 article.sgml
--- articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml	8 Aug 2004 13:43:54 -0000	1.20
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@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@
       <devicename>xl0</devicename> towards the inside
       (<acronym>LAN</acronym>).  The bridge machine has the IP <hostid
       role="ipaddr">1.2.3.4</hostid> (it is not possible that your
-      <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you a class A address like this, but for
+      <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you an address quite like this, but for
       our example it is good).</para>
 
     <programlisting># Things that we have kept state on before get to go through in a hurry
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--- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000	1.338
+++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml	5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000
@@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>The address block being used for this local area
-	      network is a Class C block
+	      network is a (historical) Class C block
 	      (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> -
 	      <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>).
 	      The default netmask is for a Class C network
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--- books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml	30 May 2006 23:08:24 -0000	1.173
+++ books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml	5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000
@@ -760,7 +760,7 @@
 
 	    <para>For example, if you have three dialup customers,
 	      <username>fred</username>, <username>sam</username>, and
-	      <username>mary</username>, that you route class C networks
+	      <username>mary</username>, that you route /24 CIDR networks
 	      for, you would type the following:</para>
 
 	    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ln -s /etc/ppp/ppp-shell /etc/ppp/ppp-fred</userinput>
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@
 	      should also contain routing information for each static
 	      IP user if required.  The line below would add a route
 	      for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0</hostid>
-	      class C via the client's ppp link.</para>
+	      /24 CIDR network via the client's ppp link.</para>
 
 	    <programlisting>fred:
   add 203.14.101.0 netmask 255.255.255.0 HISADDR