cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml

[Giorgos Keramidas]

On 2005-03-11 10:37, Pav Lucistnik <pav at freebsd.org> wrote:
> What would you say to the attached patch, which
> -) removes <application> tags around X
> -) adds <application> tags around xfree and xorg entities
> -) fixes a typo verions -> versions
> -) rewords different X system -> different X11 implementation
> ?

> -          <para>&os; versions prior 5.3 will use the default &xfree86;
> -            4.X, while latter verions will default to &xorg;.
> -            If you want to run different <application>X</application>
> -            system than the default one, add the following line to
> +          <para>&os; versions prior 5.3 will use the default
> +            <application>&xfree86;&nbsp;4.X</application>,
> +            while latter versions will default to
> +            <application>&xorg;</application>.
> +            If you want to run different X11 implementation
> +            than the default one, add the following line to
>              <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>, (if you
>              do not have this file, create it):</para>

"If you want to run _a_ different..."

Otherwise, this seems fine, IMHO.