cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers chapter.sgml

Niclas Zeising lothrandil at n00b.apagnu.se
Wed Jul 13 12:37:19 GMT 2005


Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> On Wed, Jul 13, 2005 at 01:27:45PM +0200, Niclas Zeising wrote:
> 
>>Maybe it is. Overlooked that when I made the original patch.
>>A suggestion is to say it something like: "All specific information here 
>>regarding dhclient is for use with either of the ISC DHCP client or the 
>>OpenBSD DHCP client."
> 
> [...]
> 
> Seems good; I will try to fix this night or if someone can do it ealier
> it'd be great (I have no access to the repo currently).

I made a patch with the change, so it doesn't get lost somewere. It's 
attached.
//Niclas
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--- chapter.sgml.orig	2005-07-13 14:10:58.514286400 +0200
+++ chapter.sgml	2005-07-13 14:29:21.886982400 +0200
@@ -2548,10 +2548,10 @@
 	versions prior to 6.0 use the ISC (Internet Software
 	Consortium) DHCP client (&man.dhclient.8;) implementation.
 	Later versions use the OpenBSD <command>dhclient</command>
-	taken from OpenBSD&nbsp;3.7.  All implementation-specific
-	information here regarding <command>dhclient</command> is for
-	use with both the ISC and the OpenBSD DHCP client. The DHCP
-	server is the one included in the ISC distribution.</para>
+	taken from OpenBSD&nbsp;3.7.  All specific information here regarding
+	<command>dhclient</command> is for use with either of the
+	ISC DHCP client or the OpenBSD DHCP client.  The DHCP
+	server mentioned is the one included in the ISC distribution.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>


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