cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml

Remko Lodder remko at elvandar.org
Sat Feb 12 03:41:29 PST 2005


Denis Peplin wrote:
> Hello!
> 
> Denis Peplin wrote:
> 
>> den         2005-02-10 12:04:02 UTC
>>
>>   FreeBSD doc repository
>>
>>   Modified files:
>>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml   Log:
>>   Improve "Building the Rule Script" section by adding description of
>>   converting script to rule list (the example already contain this way,
>>   but it was not described).
> 
> It seems that it is better to rename "Building the Rule Script"
> to something like "Building the Rule Script with Symbolic Substitution",
> or simply "Symbolic Substitution",
> because:
> 
> "The rules are not important in this example; how the Symbolic 
> substitution field are populated and used are."
> 
> What do you think?

Hi Den,

I think: "Building the Rule Script with Symbolic Substitution"
Is the best option of the 2 :-).

cheers ! :)

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