cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml

[Murray Stokely]

murray      2003/05/04 02:58:52 PDT

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  More work on the new GBDE section:
  
  * Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink.
  * Simplify run-on sentence in introduction.
  * Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
  * Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS
    and UFS2. (1)
  * Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote.
  * Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1).
  * Wordsmith (1, partially)
  
  PR:             docs/51598
  (1) Submitted by:       bmah
  
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