cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml

[Murray Stokely]

murray      2003/06/15 03:12:00 PDT

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  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  Use lower case indexterms, and correct an egregious entry :
  
  -    <indexterm><primary>Configuring the <command>cron</command> utility</primary></indexterm>
  +    <indexterm><primary>cron</primary>
  +      <secondary>configuration</secondary></indexterm>
  
  This is wrong for many many reasons :
  
  * The indexterm is way too long and is a direct copy of the title
    of the section it resides in.  The index is not a table of contents.
  * Two columns of index terms should fit at the back of the printed
    book, so four words is almos always out of the question.
  * indexterms relating to cron should appear near (as a subterm of) the
    'cron' entry, not as a new 'Configuration blah' entry.
  
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