cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia
chapter.sgml
Murray Stokely
murray at FreeBSD.org
Sun Aug 3 14:45:31 PDT 2003
murray 2003/08/03 14:45:29 PDT
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml
Log:
* Multiple grammar fixes.
* Reword first person sentences.
* Add missing words.
* Remove duplicate words.
* "Do this.." -> "type this .."
The video section of this chapter still needs a LOT of work.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
Revision Changes Path
1.53 +23 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml
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