cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml

[Greg Byshenk]

On Fri, Jan 14, 2005 at 01:19:36PM +0300, Denis Peplin wrote:
> Giorgos Keramidas wrote:

> >How about?
> >
> >	Not all NIC drivers are available as modules; notable examples
> >	are ISA NICs.

> Looks good :)

This is a bit trivial, but no, it doesn't.  This still refers to drivers
at the beginning of the sentence and NICs at the end.

Possibilities include:

    Not all NIC drivers are available as modules; notable examples
    are drivers for ISA NICs.

    Not all NIC drivers are available as modules; notable examples
    are those for ISA NICs.

    Drivers for some NICs are not available as modules; notable examples
    are ISA NICs.

    Drivers are not available as modules for all NICs; notable examples
    are ISA NICs.


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