svn commit: r48130 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs

From: Warren Block <wblock_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 31 Jan 2016 15:36:43 +0000 (UTC)
Author: wblock
Date: Sun Jan 31 15:36:43 2016
New Revision: 48130
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48130

Log:
  "Serial commas are only necessary when you want to be correct."

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl	Sun Jan 31 01:05:17 2016	(r48129)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl	Sun Jan 31 15:36:43 2016	(r48130)
_at__at_ -39,7 +39,7 _at__at_
 
 				<p>&os; is an advanced computer
 				  operating system used to power
-				  modern servers, desktops and
+				  modern servers, desktops, and
 				  embedded
 				  <a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>.
 				  A large
_at__at_ -47,7 +47,7 _at__at_
 				  href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">community</a>
 				  has continually developed it for
 				  more than thirty years. Its advanced
-				  networking, security and storage
+				  networking, security, and storage
 				  features have made &os; the platform
 				  of choice for many of the
 				  <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest web sites</a>
Received on Sun Jan 31 2016 - 15:36:45 UTC