svn commit: r40763 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

From: Eitan Adler <eadler_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 27 Jan 2013 12:51:13 +0000 (UTC)
Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jan 27 12:51:12 2013
New Revision: 40763
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40763

Log:
  Simplify some language
  
  Translators may ignore.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:10 2013	(r40762)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:12 2013	(r40763)
_at__at_ -2799,8 +2799,8 _at__at_ kern.timecounter.hardware: TSC -&gt; i82
 	    can be installed and uninstalled again easily without having
 	    to know the gory details of which files it includes.</para>
 
-	  <para>Invoke
-	    the &man.pkg.add.1; command on the specific package files
+	  <para>Use
+	    &man.pkg.add.1; on the specific package files
 	    you are interested in installing.  Package files can usually
 	    be identified by their <filename>.tbz</filename> suffix and
 	    CD-ROM distribution people will have a
_at__at_ -7041,7 +7041,7 _at__at_ set dfilter 3 permit 0/0 0/0</programlis
 
 	  <para>This will make <application>sendmail</application> queue
 	    everything until the queue is run (usually, sendmail is
-	    invoked with <option>-bd -q30m</option>, telling it to run
+	    run with <option>-bd -q30m</option>, telling it to run
 	    the queue every 30 minutes) or until a <command>sendmail
 	    <option>-q</option></command> is done (perhaps from your
 	    <filename>ppp.linkup</filename>).</para>
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