[Bug 279481] Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback

https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=279481

            Bug ID: 279481
           Summary: Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Many People
          Priority: ---
         Component: Books & Articles
          Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: ntremble@gmail.com

FreeBSD Handbook Section 22.4.5.3 ZFS Snapshot Rollback

Current:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer
and if preferring an older version."

Suggested:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer
valid, or an older version is preferred.

And further down in the same section, next paragraph:
Current:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because of a careless rm operation
that removes too much data than intended."

Suggested:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because a careless rm operation
removed more data than intended."

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