From nobody Fri Sep 01 00:59:48 2023 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4RcKSN665tz4rqfT for ; Fri, 1 Sep 2023 00:59:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RcKSN4Frnz3fBC for ; Fri, 1 Sep 2023 00:59:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1693529988; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=JqKCv7nHWd7HxFDWGP4EhSaZGIJLwcUPVMGkP2rtwRVlCyhm1LDSakDuzn5n4mlh/TRA1p ZCgJX+49JkPSdqfBc8wc2zlTUl37/xnmoHRAPgSZIlYre3ECV+svmw10Abn9fnF/5FhHwO Hurw1lu4NG51yB5w2cGUIgNTG/fiymdzdk6iIdk1eGgxxrIbGFPxFbvNHZGbdEX+eIzQdw Ks4gefYKUdeO97a8MplyVRW4hmKe5gLTtcjCJaSGNBZfOVUgE9KGhpHiVLgeA3KsWxEP4V 2FFRazbSKjcb3w8iIXd8UU4WOG9aQaQ9Uy1VU+zdU1pXTj7XBnjZNsmIAMJDDg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1693529988; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=5PccBInJlVexdvSfVhINLGRXEiTaxEJvdnL6xMjoy7o=; b=nX/nQ+nleRQZyBI8NB3sQpOAJAobrTqQo4esD3cW+iC/4W9paVfFsRjffdAfbAJcAujzVU O/lEjtcYOlbQmK095wLy+MaWYh8ruMDBCOGeeNlm091wdMqBaZtAKkx+SsYVYM2k1ZIFrm VC2Ps0cQ1G58IUuaYWkUbE/eh6MAT3zVeFYiSPyCyKkMRdDEOrscWgCx5ThVaqg5d+SlZH aiDxOy4N+t329EsP0aMpo8RwSeYXo2q4LXv47SM6gwYYNUPa6bXd3S+vMsuqYAOOhkSbd1 Le8BaPhOwFs5jqRAlXkzSplEOLPT1wQQVUJi/Dg8lwjBAmdkw4KS/hgAW3zXTg== Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RcKSN3HXFzgj1 for ; Fri, 1 Sep 2023 00:59:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 3810xmgQ092098 for ; Fri, 1 Sep 2023 00:59:48 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 3810xmKm092097 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Fri, 1 Sep 2023 00:59:48 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 273487] FDP: tools: Asciidoctor, plural, conciseness Date: Fri, 01 Sep 2023 00:59:48 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: new X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: needs-patch X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@gmail.com X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: bug_id short_desc product version rep_platform bug_file_loc op_sys bug_status keywords bug_severity priority component assigned_to reporter Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D273487 Bug ID: 273487 Summary: FDP: tools: Asciidoctor, plural, conciseness Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any URL: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/edit/main/docum entation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/tools/_index.adoc OS: Any Status: New Keywords: needs-patch Severity: Affects Some People Priority: --- Component: Books & Articles Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: grahamperrin@gmail.com Asciidoctor (not AsciiDoctor). A subheading for a single editor should not be followed by a nested paragra= ph about multiple editors.=20 Be concise (avoid 'editors for editing', and so on). --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=