From nobody Thu Sep 22 05:31:48 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4MY3n05hQyz4cPSC for ; Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4MY3n03hksz3SMC for ; Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4MY3n02n5XzJqB for ; Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 28M5Vmrk042138 for ; Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 28M5VmO8042137 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 266111] FAQ: minor corrections and improvements Date: Thu, 22 Sep 2022 05:31:48 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: CC X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: pauamma@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Status: In Progress X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: cc Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1663824708; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=rMCNKEx2VmcBTOxE2+MtWKvjKicGhefMQVMkP/muanc=; b=qse8wm561ePLkXjAcdofZ9mLEgINDbJ/dR8X+cua8Zcbb4fcYSmSDhKuVhl0nkbBJIuYUg 7vsRsdL2K/m/HjCJFQ23+bBvzyxlFEcQjZUL/2LkbIIh1dkU3THBarO4GREApZ5E7g5kj1 rhXZsmCni/dtsjexar7piKJar4VTGxwe/Vi1ouTPUatEjW4oKF0zAC/1wv5gyquxQf2y8d l0UBKKlBlwnxFc8iCPvUjspDc8Fk7zZHvPtA1JmZ5T0nQ5VaWI7kgOeAJiKV0/xgTWZ+ie R+k80UjITFBcAOpwBo1E7YA6qbsbIp5i9Kz7BFQXE3hgEO47qNPSGfPfp1Z79g== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1663824708; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=A+a+DBm/KfL/Fto8h15jgYWaQfG6kTpHCHEce2hfwq2MMQ0qUtd71VZecrdTSO1WboKbr7 Vt4qAykL43fmte+LTMZzjMbwc/LQreJDja/zIgbykLhMfvzoOh7P4qVF4z64nVzrjm9M2k cIzgj57FxuSbNsl+spqHC6vGMBCZb58TikK6xQ+3KqeazHOAu8PuUjaorMZD9dnNCkNAe9 65cfLan91dGb/r7vj51xPq9RQfIvUpVZ0ID06xJeAP+OxuNpmo1iVNtdnDUckO6csGyMCs I/9O35XuAh3ZSGf1CM6Uw0dt0vJQiauLfRcSPrkT0VVxiS4mOvhGmTdo0ew5xQ== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D266111 Pau Amma changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- CC| |pauamma@FreeBSD.org --- Comment #3 from Pau Amma --- (In reply to Graham Perrin from comment #0) I'm not sure I agree overall with not wording FAQs as questions. For one th= ing, my brain, coming upon this and not seeing a question, would likely alert and drop out of reading for comprehension and into editor mode because that's n= ot woerded as a question. It would take conscious effort to get it back on tra= ck. I no longer use the FAQ much myself, but it would still hinder my attempt to help someone in IRC, so it's not just about me, even if no one but me has t= hat problem which I doubt. (That's how I handle the proofreading and most of the copyediting I do, BTW: I just read and when my brain goes "*ping* problem here!" I look closer.) Regarding that specific question, I would instead tighten it up as "Typing 'startx' displays ' --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug.=