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s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1651408840; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=bpgIFa1A+I2MurmZ3Cx6brRpeRTENWBm9beO54ODJtaYG1VcyXxJ401gz4hhbcxVgk5A8o M2L5oRg7Hz97VnvvsQG4Z8FM/MNBcYAstEn00w9cx8kpbpr2YSmEbk0GPJ3nihLT1PULlg cEfuUizjgyKiMXuVgE8iRZracMPgoOCDQlki5UdDGzhMC99voaHbpdAu2VVxh2Dodv2sS5 q366O5PmX3YfZZt7NHzEeb8QUyGsqeSMvMf1FmqUbY0ClXtlNd6Zx9JQ2y/QErtje1eRWN xDFrbeOv/aXI4t4inK7m9sk4uSlm98Rav37JQV0bdqxqkqCIEjUMKGp6sk430g== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D263324 --- Comment #3 from PauAmma --- Comment on attachment 233331 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=3D233331 diff to add virtualization to synposis >diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.ado= c b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc >index 625462331d..f06cb706ca 100644 >--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc >+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc >@@ -132,6 +132,7 @@ A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2 GB of RAM. > =3D=3D Pre-Installation Tasks >=20 > Once it has been determined that the system meets the minimum hardware re= quirements for installing FreeBSD, the installation file should be download= ed and the installation media prepared. >+An alternative is to use virtualization (crossref:virtualization[virtuali= zation,Virtualization]) which allows multiple operating systems to run at t= he same time without modifying any disk partitions. I'd merge the repeated "virtualization" into one. Something like:=20 An alternative is to use crossref:virtualization[virtualization,virtualization], which allows... > Before doing this, check that the system is ready for an installation by = verifying the items in this checklist: >=20 > [.procedure] >@@ -169,7 +170,7 @@ Since the possibility of selecting the wrong partition= exists, always backup any > =3D=3D=3D=3D > + > Disk partitions containing different operating systems make it possible t= o install multiple operating systems on one computer. >-An alternative is to use virtualization (crossref:virtualization[virtuali= zation,Virtualization]) which allows multiple operating systems to run at t= he same time without modifying any disk partitions. >+Virtualization (crossref:virtualization[virtualization,Virtualization]) a= llows multiple operating systems to run at the same time without modifying = any disk partitions. Same here, and I think I'd keep "An alternative...". Or maybe just keep the added earlier mention and remove this one, not sure. > . *Collect Network Information* > + > Some FreeBSD installation methods require a network connection in order t= o download the installation files. >diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc b/doc= umentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc >index 3f9a2a457d..0242b01a6c 100644 >--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc >+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc >@@ -488,7 +488,7 @@ The <> utility allows creating, destroy= ing, and managing datasets > [[zfs-zpool-create]] > =3D=3D=3D Creating and Destroying Storage Pools >=20 >-Creating a ZFS storage pool (_zpool_) requires permanent decisions, as th= e pool structure cannot change after creation. >+Creating a ZFS storage pool requires permanent decisions, as the pool str= ucture cannot change after creation. > The most important decision is which types of vdevs to group the physical= disks into.=20 > See the list of <> for details about the possib= le options. > After creating the pool, most vdev types do not allow adding disks to the= vdev. >@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ This can cause undefined behavior in applications whic= h had open files on those > [[zfs-zpool-attach]] > =3D=3D=3D Adding and Removing Devices >=20 >-Two ways exist for adding disks to a zpool: attaching a disk to an existi= ng vdev with `zpool attach`, or adding vdevs to the pool with `zpool add`. >+Two ways exist for adding disks to a pool: attaching a disk to an existin= g vdev with `zpool attach`, or adding vdevs to the pool with `zpool add`. > Some <> allow adding disks to the vdev after cr= eation. >=20 > A pool created with a single disk lacks redundancy. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=