[Bug 265267] portmgr is Ports Management Team, so "the portmgr team" is a strange phrase

https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=265267

--- Comment #1 from Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> ---
Also, whilst there …


1) superfluous uppercase: 

> … responsibilities, The Ports Management Team may …

– should be lowercase t (the); the Ports Management Team


2) the unordered list of nine items, two of which comprise two sentences, I
would:

   a) make each listing begin lowercase

   b) where there's a second sentence within a point, make it 
      a separate point with additional indent

   c) punctuate only the final listing with '.'

– compare with the style of the four-point list under
<https://www.freebsd.org/portmgr/policies/#_assure_the_integrity_of_the_ports_collection>. 


All subject to approval by portmgr@ and core@

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