From nobody Sat Jul 16 22:13:02 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4LljCf3m1wz4WS4p for ; Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4LljCf1v7Fz3Mcc for ; Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4LljCf0xqCzckW for ; Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 26GMD2aG010304 for ; Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 26GMD2YX010303 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 265247] Typos in the FreeBsd HandBook, Chapter 30 'Network Servers', Section 30.4 titled 'Network Information System'. Date: Sat, 16 Jul 2022 22:13:02 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Many People X-Bugzilla-Who: ghislain@smartix.llc X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1658009582; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=zhRQK0Q8ikFedFxf5rATGjIneXlGnEDwpVa7Wi4Kde8=; b=Hiy+CqsSoUvRCxKxU/cRiqxTkH8BKtCkpJwtGivu1utSiybEqMxhbqeVjNSYrpGdf5ZeT5 IJDWTQiVQZ0BPKnyi6XfkRYxnijpYdKCBU9mp8UwSoDPP33hb6YoNch5WM/PxixMQPy+di gofqhWvNh2mu64MvjxQ2nu/5D5haO+RFE6yn0lnHrFsbgdHyz+p4tGiClRzGRG+OAvB9bh FChTszz/laTJ9czjoowgSKm82DBrViYiewXHrq0HS1RdTOcEWAE4kHPhi7x9YjmmpbyAL+ rtc0m1Y1xHpQAVEXQgxZhZ+89KjJUHgqV9fk9m6W3zihnQlxt/c6FD67k5RWYw== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1658009582; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=qdNE/lssabvM1lAhoZkz6evvi9NZh2f7J/5y6JTv5HRfxqe65pNJlWGOI41K4s2LQJeoTW d+IPOjomy9/ppkt561fmzR5iTzcnyVppx1Unyx0YKgKEKthqG6SUZQVQ6IoYIcLCU7O4z1 4XzvuPH5dzNhvwb9ReGDo8uJSodnlS3CdR8GiD0H0X0yN1DZ9evusWrvZlZRlsL8T4ui8w G8qx+dPpb6qbtvSsyBwFpV5WM4JAGCHetaU6sJpT0ivPat56iRmhXr55yp4seGR6vjzqRQ FxhqGsdmZ7yZo7AxgE2uTw/Yo0ONB8KBsA1If4kZ7lOo1KGJgLsFK7i7g2rzhw== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D265247 --- Comment #2 from ghislain --- Stumbled on few more typos in the same section (Ch 30.4) so additional corrections were made.=20 Few suggestions that may need review are located in: 1- Section 30.4.7 "NIS Security" where `#` was replaced with the suggested `+"#"+`. The double quotes were added to stay consistent with how the manual page documents it and also to make it clearer. This small bug also affected how the subsequent phrase "A sample [.filename]#securenets#" rendered. The suggested `+"#"+` fixes both issues. 2- Section 30.4.8. "Using Netgroups" where this sentence 'Each set of brack= ets represents either a group of one or more users or the name of another netgroup.' is replaced with 'Each set of parenthesis represents either a gr= oup of one or more users or the name of another netgroup.' The difference lies in how the second column in a netgroup specification is being described; using "parenthesis" instead of "brackets" removes nuances = and makes it clear as to what symbols to use. A second diff file (the most relevant diff) named "diff2" was attached. IMPORTANT NOTE/IMPLICATIONS: The word "parenthesis" may have to be replaced/translated in other language= s to stay consistent. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=