[Bug 262998] Mixture of singular and plural, and possible excess white space, in the manual page for bectl(8)

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Date: Sat, 02 Apr 2022 08:18:08 UTC 
https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=262998

            Bug ID: 262998
           Summary: Mixture of singular and plural, and possible excess
                    white space, in the manual page for bectl(8)
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
               URL: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-src/commit/c0f846ff
                    235296249271b1235ff6a52b7d23cefb?diff=unified#diff-c02
                    d05827bafa5f8205b59bd5e53274a6043030b432b47ffcb9bb7907
                    bb5d5f5R395-R396
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Some People
          Priority: ---
         Component: Manual Pages
          Assignee: bugs@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: grahamperrin@gmail.com
                CC: doc@FreeBSD.org, kevans@freebsd.org

<https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-src/commit/c0f846ff235296249271b1235ff6a52b7d23cefb?diff=unified#diff-c02d05827bafa5f8205b59bd5e53274a6043030b432b47ffcb9bb7907bb5d5f5R395-R396>

> The other style of boot environments in use, frequently called deep boot 
> environments, organizes some or all of the boot environment …

– should probably be: 

> The other style of boot environment in use, frequently called deep boot 
> environment, organizes some or all of the boot environment …

𠄲‒ singular, not plural, in two places. 

Sorry, I should have noticed this during the review
<https://reviews.freebsd.org/D34538>, but I find it difficult to read when
marked up.

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