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Date: Mon, 23 Jun 2025 07:47:19 UTC
The branch stable/14 has been updated by bapt:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=953119c5f5ce79865f21d642fcdd582285cd5c89
commit 953119c5f5ce79865f21d642fcdd582285cd5c89
Author: Maxim Konovalov <maxim@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2025-06-19 13:14:33 +0000
Commit: Baptiste Daroussin <bapt@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2025-06-23 07:47:02 +0000
nuageinit.7: language and grammar improvements
Reviewed by: bapt
(cherry picked from commit b78b7fa01fc775c9bb95ac7d68fbf3994a5ab5c5)
---
libexec/nuageinit/nuageinit.7 | 20 ++++++++++----------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/libexec/nuageinit/nuageinit.7 b/libexec/nuageinit/nuageinit.7
index dd6c7b5d0a64..1d2f83fe62e0 100644
--- a/libexec/nuageinit/nuageinit.7
+++ b/libexec/nuageinit/nuageinit.7
@@ -14,19 +14,19 @@ The
program is used to initialize instances in a cloud environment.
.Nm
runs at the first boot after the system installation.
-It is composed of 3
+It is composed of three
.Xr rc 8
scripts:
.Bl -tag -width "nuageinit"
.It Cm nuageinit
-This script will detect the configuration disk kind of cloud environment the
-system runs on and gather accordingly the configuration data.
+This script detects the type of cloud environment and gathers
+the configuration data accordingly.
The following cloud environments are supported right now:
.Bl -tag -width "OpenStack"
.It ondisk
A cloud agnostic environment where the disk is provided to the system
with the configuration data on it.
-The disk should be formatted in one of the following formats:
+The disk must be formatted using one of the following filesystems:
.Xr cd9660 4
or
.Xr msdosfs 4
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@ The default user for nuageinit is a user named
.Va freebsd
with a password set to
.Va freebsd
-and a shell set to
+and a login shell set to
.Va /bin/sh .
.Sh CONFIGURATION
The configuration of
.Nm
-is typically done via metadata provided by the cloud provider.
+is typically provided as metadata by the cloud provider.
The metadata is presented to nuageinit in different forms depending on
the provider:
.Bl -tag -width "config-2"
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ then the metadata is provided in the form of a file named
.Pa meta-data
in YAML format.
.Nm
-will configure the hostname of the instance according the value of the
+will configure the hostname of the instance according to the value of the
following variables
.Va local-hostname
or
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ If this file starts with a
.Qq #! ,
it will be executed at the end of the boot via
.Cm nuageinit_user_data_script .
-If this files starts with
+If this file starts with
.Qq #!cloud-config ,
it will be parsed as a YAML configuration file.
All other cases will be ignored.
@@ -217,12 +217,12 @@ An entry which should be appended to
.Pp
A special case exist: if the entry is a simple string with the value
.Qq default ,
-than the default user is created.
+then the default user is created.
.It Ic chpasswd
Change the passwords for users, it accepts the following keys:
.Bl -tag -width "expire"
.It Ic expire
-Boolean to force the user to changes their password during the first login
+Boolean to force the user to change their password on first login.
.It Ic users
An array of objects:
.Bl -tag -width "password"