git: e912e36fe9 - main - Avoid the use of "you" in the wayland chapter

From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 26 Sep 2025 10:32:49 UTC
The branch main has been updated by bcr:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=e912e36fe97573085fcae69a55f64194a84f2981

commit e912e36fe97573085fcae69a55f64194a84f2981
Author:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2025-08-28 16:03:58 +0000
Commit:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2025-09-26 10:32:12 +0000

    Avoid the use of "you" in the wayland chapter
    
    Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according
    to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and
    often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as
    these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of
    this change).
    
    Event:                  Oslo Hackathon 2025
    Differential Revision:  https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52221
---
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/wayland/_index.adoc | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/wayland/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/wayland/_index.adoc
index aa402971ff..4d57d605c7 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/wayland/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/wayland/_index.adoc
@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@ endif::[]
 An installation of FreeBSD using bsdinstall does not automatically install a graphical user interface.
 This chapter describes how to select, install, and configure a Wayland compositor, which provides a graphical environment.
 
-Before reading this chapter, you should:
+Before reading this chapter:
 
 * Know how to install crossref:ports[ports,additional third-party software].
 
-* How to identify and configure crossref:x11[x-graphic-card-drivers,drivers for your graphics hardware].
+* Know how to identify and configure crossref:x11[x-graphic-card-drivers,drivers for the graphics hardware].
 
-After reading this chapter, you will know:
+Read this chapter to learn:
 
 * How to configure FreeBSD to host a Wayland graphical environment.
 
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@ The Sway compositor is a tiling compositor that attempts to replace the i3 windo
 It should work with the user's current i3 configuration; however, new features may require some additional setup.
 
 Before starting the Sway installation, ensure that a graphics card (GPU) is installed and configured correctly.
-Refer to the section crossref:x11[x-graphic-card-drivers,drivers for your graphics hardware] for guidance.
+Refer to the section crossref:x11[x-graphic-card-drivers,drivers for the graphics hardware] for guidance.
 This step is essential for the Sway compositor to function properly.
 
 In the forthcoming examples, a fresh installation without migrating any i3 configuration will be assumed.
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ Several important changes should be made like the following:
 # Logo key. Use Mod1 for Alt.
 input * xkb_rules evdev
 set $mod Mod4
-# Your preferred terminal emulator
+# The preferred terminal emulator
 set $term alacritty
 set $lock swaylock -f -c 000000
 output "My Workstation" mode 1366x768@60Hz position 1366 0