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Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:07:34 UTC
The branch main has been updated by bcr:
URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=6bac0268b5b3e9a55da774660644ad63a468da38
commit 6bac0268b5b3e9a55da774660644ad63a468da38
Author: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2025-08-28 15:24:25 +0000
Commit: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2025-08-28 17:07:18 +0000
Avoid the use of "you" in the Multimedia chapter
Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according
to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and
often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as
these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of
this change).
Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025
Reviewed by: carlavilla
Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52212
---
documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc
index 17cb077290..0950c9d5c1 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Multimedia applications and technologies have become an integral part of modern
This chapter covers various multimedia components such as audio, video, and image processing.
It also discusses various media formats and codecs, as well as tools and applications for multimedia creation and playback.
Additionally, the chapter covers multimedia system configuration, troubleshooting, and optimization.
-Whether you are a multimedia enthusiast or a professional content creator, FreeBSD offers a robust platform for multimedia work.
+FreeBSD provides a robust platform for multimedia work, suitable for both multimedia enthusiasts and professional content creators.
This chapter aims to help get the most out of FreeBSD's multimedia capabilities, providing useful information and practical examples to help get started.
[[sound-setup]]
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ To install GNOME Music, execute:
=== Audacious
Audacious is an open source audio player.
-A descendant of XMMS, it plays your music how you want it, without stealing away your computer's resources from other tasks.
+As a descendant of XMMS, it provides music playback while maintaining efficient use of system resources.
To install Audacious, execute: