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Wed, 20 Mar 2024 00:52:18 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Wed, 20 Mar 2024 00:52:18 GMT Message-Id: <202403200052.42K0qIGS047333@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Colin Percival Subject: git: f2be69ba3c - main - release archetype: minor tweaks List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: cperciva X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: f2be69ba3cae4ad46aee3ad89385ffbfb8e27516 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated The branch main has been updated by cperciva: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=f2be69ba3cae4ad46aee3ad89385ffbfb8e27516 commit f2be69ba3cae4ad46aee3ad89385ffbfb8e27516 Author: Colin Percival AuthorDate: 2024-03-18 04:58:27 +0000 Commit: Colin Percival CommitDate: 2024-03-20 00:51:52 +0000 release archetype: minor tweaks Make link markup less verbose; adjust some text to match what was used in recent releases. --- website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc b/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc index fc7452f16a..fb4ae6f935 100644 --- a/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc +++ b/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc @@ -32,13 +32,13 @@ It describes recently added, changed, or deleted features of FreeBSD. It also provides some notes on upgrading from previous versions of FreeBSD. The {releaseType} distribution to which these release notes apply represents the latest point along the {releaseBranch} development branch since {releaseBranch} was created. -Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/]. +Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[]. The {releaseType} distribution to which these release notes apply represents a point along the {releaseBranch} development branch between {releasePrev} and the future {releaseNext}. -Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/]. +Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[]. This distribution of FreeBSD {releaseCurrent} is a {releaseType} distribution. -It can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/] or any of its mirrors. +It can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[] or any of its mirrors. More information on obtaining this (or other) {releaseType} distributions of FreeBSD can be found in the link:{handbook}/mirrors[Obtaining FreeBSD appendix] to the link:{handbook}/[FreeBSD Handbook]. All users are encouraged to consult the release errata before installing FreeBSD. @@ -57,7 +57,8 @@ Clearly the release notes cannot list every single change made to FreeBSD betwee == Upgrading from Previous Releases of FreeBSD Binary upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the various security branches) are supported using the man:freebsd-update[8] utility. -The binary upgrade procedure will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC kernels distributed as a part of an official FreeBSD release. +See the release-specific upgrade procedure, link:../installation/#upgrade-binary[FreeBSD {releaseCurrent} upgrade information], with more details in the FreeBSD handbook link:{handbook}cutting-edge/#freebsdupdate-upgrade[binary upgrade procedure]. +This will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC kernels distributed as a part of an official FreeBSD release. The man:freebsd-update[8] utility requires that the host being upgraded have Internet connectivity. Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the FreeBSD base system from source code) from previous versions are supported, according to the instructions in [.filename]#/usr/src/UPDATING#. @@ -171,7 +172,7 @@ This section describes changes that affect networking in FreeBSD. [[hardware]] == Hardware Support -This section covers general hardware support for physical machines, hypervisors, and virtualizatio n environments, as well as hardware changes and updates that do not otherwise fit in other sections of this document. +This section covers general hardware support for physical machines, hypervisors, and virtualization environments, as well as hardware changes and updates that do not otherwise fit in other sections of this document. Please see link:https://www.freebsd.org/releases/X.0R/hardware[the list of hardware] supported by {releaseCurrent}, as well as link:https://www.freebsd.org/platforms/[the platforms page] for the complete list of supported CPU architectures.