git: dfff80b4ad - main - Status/2023Q3/gitlab.adoc: Fixes

The branch main has been updated by salvadore:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=dfff80b4adcc5fe6a2c4de23d7ee342cf97a01dd

commit dfff80b4adcc5fe6a2c4de23d7ee342cf97a01dd
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: 2023-10-05 08:57:12 +0000
Commit:     Lorenzo Salvadore <salvadore@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-10-05 09:01:06 +0000

    Status/2023Q3/gitlab.adoc: Fixes
    
    Pull Request:   https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/276
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 .../content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/gitlab.adoc   | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/gitlab.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/gitlab.adoc
index bca633a1f8..7b2d0e6d83 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/gitlab.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-07-2023-09/gitlab.adoc
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
-=== Gitlab 16.3 available
+=== GitLab 16.3 Available
 
-Links: +
-link:https://about.gitlab.com/releases/2023/08/22/gitlab-16-3-released/[Gitlab 16.3 New Features] URL: link:https://about.gitlab.com/releases/2023/08/22/gitlab-16-3-released/[https://about.gitlab.com/releases/2023/08/22/gitlab-16-3-released/]
+Link: +
+link:https://about.gitlab.com/releases/2023/08/22/gitlab-16-3-released/[Gitlab 16.3 New Features] URL: link:https://about.gitlab.com/releases/2023/08/22/gitlab-16-3-released/[]
 
 Contact: Matthias Fechner <mfechner@FreeBSD.org>
 
-GitLab is a DevOps Platform.
+GitLab is a DevOps platform.
 It brings velocity with confidence, security without sacrifice, and visibility into DevOps success.
 
 Version 16.3 is now available on FreeBSD: please check the package:www/gitlab-ce[] port.
 The upgrade is very important as version 16.3 will be required for all further upgrades.
-You cannot upgrade to 16.4 if you have not upgraded to 16.3 before.
+Upgrade to 16.4 is only possible from GitLab 16.3.
 
 Documentation for installation can be found at link:https://gitlab.fechner.net/mfechner/Gitlab-docu/-/blob/master/install/16.3-freebsd.md?ref_type=heads[].
 Documentation for upgrading is available at https://gitlab.fechner.net/mfechner/Gitlab-docu/-/blob/master/update/16.1-16.3-freebsd.md?ref_type=heads[].
 
-I will wait for the upgrade to 16.4 (which will be released around 20.9. or 22.9., not sure) till quarterly branch 2023Q4 is created, to avoid breaking systems of users which are not in main branch for packages.
-Gitlab users should always use main branch, as described in the installation manual.
+I will wait for the upgrade to 16.4 (which will be released around 20.9. or 22.9., not sure) until ports _quarterly_ branch 2023Q4 is created, to avoid breaking systems that do not use the main branch (_latest_).
+GitLab users should always choose the main branch, as described in the installation manual.