git: 743e18a26a - main - status: 2023q2: memory compaction: fixes, grammar

From: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2023 03:14:25 UTC
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=743e18a26af0b24571f2d05218c67469142ab656

commit 743e18a26af0b24571f2d05218c67469142ab656
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-07-10 20:31:28 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-07-13 03:10:50 +0000

    status: 2023q2: memory compaction: fixes, grammar
    
    Add a missing line break.
    
    https://reviews.freebsd.org/D407724
    and
    https://reviews.freebsd.org/D407725
    are non-existent.
    
    For a non-person, use something other than 'whose'.
    
    Approved-by:  salvadore
    Fixes:        dec7526dc3 Status/2023Q2/compaction.adoc: Add report
    Pull-request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/204
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 website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/compaction.adoc | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/compaction.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/compaction.adoc
index b3577d51bf..fb3eb1f24a 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/compaction.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/compaction.adoc
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@
 
 Links: +
 link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/PhysicalMemoryAntiFragmentationMechanisms[GSoC project wiki page] URL: link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/PhysicalMemoryAntiFragmentationMechanisms[] +
-link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40575[Differential revision 40575] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40575[]
-link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40772[Differential revision 407725] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D407724[]
+link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40575[Differential revision 40575] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40575[] +
+link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40772[Differential revision 40772] URL: link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40772[]
 
 Contact: Bojan Novković <bnovkov@FreeBSD.org>
 
-Most modern CPU architectures offer performance boosts by supporting pages that are larger than the standard page size. 
+Most modern CPU architectures offer performance boosts by supporting pages that are larger than the standard page size.
 Unfortunately, allocating such pages can fail due to a high degree of physical memory fragmentation.
 This work implements physical memory compaction as a means of actively reducing fragmentation in running systems.
-This work is part of an ongoing Google Summer of Code project whose goal is to add various physical memory anti-fragmentation measures to the virtual memory subsystem.
+This work is part of an ongoing Google Summer of Code project, the goal of which is to add various physical memory anti-fragmentation measures to the virtual memory subsystem.
 
 Differential link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40575[D40575] implements a well-known metric used for quantifying the degree of physical memory fragmentation.
 Differential link:https://reviews.freebsd.org/D40772[D40772] implements physical memory compaction and adds a daemon that monitors the system and performs compaction when needed.