git: 219ac239e0 - main - status: 2023q2: mfsBSD: correction, and a few minor changes

From: Graham Perrin <grahamperrin_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2023 03:14:22 UTC
The branch main has been updated by grahamperrin:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=219ac239e09360a7afb0fc58f5cf83cb3481b0f4

commit 219ac239e09360a7afb0fc58f5cf83cb3481b0f4
Author:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-07-09 14:50:59 +0000
Commit:     Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-07-13 03:10:49 +0000

    status: 2023q2: mfsBSD: correction, and a few minor changes
    
    PRs (plural of pull request) should be without an apostrophe. Whilst
    correcting, expand the abbreviation.
    
    Be concise with subheadings.
    
    Move the project repository link up, to the Links: section, and reword
    things appropriately.
    
    include::shared/authors.adoc[]
    
    - and use the inclusion as a point of reference.
    
    Other minor changes, including markup.
    
    Reviewed-by:  jrm, soobinrho
    Approved-by:  salvadore, soobinrho
    Pull-request: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/207
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 .../en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/mfsbsd.adoc   | 33 ++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/mfsbsd.adoc b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/mfsbsd.adoc
index fc87253f1d..6d0973fdcd 100644
--- a/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/mfsbsd.adoc
+++ b/website/content/en/status/report-2023-04-2023-06/mfsbsd.adoc
@@ -1,28 +1,31 @@
-=== Integrate mfsBSD into the release building tools 
+include::shared/authors.adoc[]
 
-Links: + 
-link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[Wiki Article] URL: link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[] 
+=== Integrate mfsBSD into the release building tools
 
-Contact: Soobin Rho <soobinrho@FreeBSD.org> 
+Links: +
+link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[Wiki Article] URL: link:https://wiki.freebsd.org/SummerOfCode2023Projects/IntegrateMfsBSDIntoTheReleaseBuildingTools[] +
+link:https://github.com/soobinrho/freebsd-src/tree/integrate-mfsBSD-building[Project repository (integrate-mfsBSD-building branch)] URL: link:https://github.com/soobinrho/freebsd-src/tree/integrate-mfsBSD-building[]
 
-==== What is mfsBSD? 
+Contact: Soobin Rho <soobinrho@FreeBSD.org>
 
-"mfsBSD is a toolset to create small-sized but full-featured mfsroot based distributions of FreeBSD that store all files in memory (MFS) [Memory File System] and load from hard drive, usb storage device or optical media. 
-It can be used for a variety of purposes, including diskless systems, recovery partitions and remotely overwriting other operating systems." 
+==== What is mfsBSD?
 
-mailto:mm@FreeBSD.org[Martin Matuska] is both the author of the link:https://people.freebsd.org/~mm/mfsbsd/mfsbsd.pdf[mfsBSD white paper] and the maintainer of the link:https://github.com/mmatuska/mfsbsd[mfsBSD repository]. 
+"mfsBSD is a toolset to create small-sized but full-featured mfsroot based distributions of FreeBSD that store all files in memory (MFS) [Memory File System] and load from hard drive, usb storage device or optical media.
+It can be used for a variety of purposes, including diskless systems, recovery partitions and remotely overwriting other operating systems."
 
-==== Purpose of this project 
+mailto:mm@FreeBSD.org[Martin Matuska] is both the author of the link:https://people.freebsd.org/~mm/mfsbsd/mfsbsd.pdf[mfsBSD white paper] and the maintainer of the link:https://github.com/mmatuska/mfsbsd[mfsBSD repository].
 
-This project creates an additional target of the weekly snapshots of -current and -stable versions of mfsBSD images in the src/release makefile. 
+==== Purpose
+
+This project creates an additional target of the weekly snapshots of -current and -stable versions of mfsBSD images in the src/release makefile.
 Currently, only the release versions of mfsBSD images are produced, which means they tend to get out of sync with the tools in base. 
-This project aims to address that problem. 
+This project aims to address that problem.
 
-==== Location of this project 
+==== Location
 
-This project is a GSoC 2023 (Google Summer of Code) project, under mentorship from mailto:otis@FreeBSD.org[Juraj Lutter] and mailto:jrm@FreeBSD.org[Joseph Mingrone]. 
+This is a GSoC 2023 (Google Summer of Code) project. As such, the official coding period is between May 29, 2023 and August 28, 2023.
+As a humble beginner in the open-source community, the author welcomes all comments / suggestions / pull requests in the project repository, which will be the location for all code throughout this period.
 
-As a GSoC project, the official coding period is between May 29, 2023 and August 28, 2023. 
-As a humble beginner in the open-source community, the author of this project welcomes all comments / suggestions / PR's to the link:https://github.com/soobinrho/freebsd-src/tree/integrate-mfsBSD-building[project repository], which is where all the code for this project will be located for the duration of the official GSoC coding period. 
+Mentors: {otis-name} and {jrm-name}
 
 Sponsor: Google, Inc. (GSoC 2023)